Writing Composition

online shopping

  • 网购已经成为了人们生活的一个重要组成部分。报刊Teens 举办了一个征文活动，邀请大家就网购谈谈自己的看法。请你根据提示问题，写一篇英文短文参加此次活动。
  • 提示词：convenient, compare, save money, dangerous
  • What are the advantages of online shopping?
  • What are the disadvantages of online shopping?
  • What do you think of online shopping?
  • Online shopping is a very important part of our life. It has several advantages. It’s convenient because you can shop at any time and only need a computer. Also, you can compare the prices of the same product to save money. On the other side online shopping has some disadvantages. We can’t see the real goods. They may not be the same as what you think. I think it’ll become the main trend of shopping. Online shopping is more and more popular. It’s changing our life.

Lesson 22 Colour

Mr. Tom was a worker in a car factory and had been worked there for 6 years. He worked very hard and carefully. But the NCoV-2019 led his factory loosing lots of money, so Tom and other workers got pink slips. It's out of the blue when Tom got the news. He went red that he didn't do anything wrong. It's totally unfair. He ask his co-workers and they decided to solve it by law. In the end, the factory apologize and let them continue to work.

travel plan

Dear Tom, I am very glad that you will come to Beijing this summer vacation. Now let me design a one-day tour of Beijing for you.

In the morning, you can go to Beihai park by taking subway or taxi. There is a beautiful lake in the park and you can take a boat to enjoy the wonderful view around it. You can take photos and relax yourself too. Next you can walk to visit the Forbidden City which we chinese call it “Gugong”. It’s royal palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties and one of the largest palaces in the world. At there, you can learn about culture, history and see many relics. Then out of the gate of Gugong, you will come to the Tiananmen Square on feet. You can see the stately flag-raising ceremony and take photos for memory. At last, you can take a bus to the Qianmen Street. There are many old unique shops and restaurants which are all very famous. It’s a really good place for shopping and eating. The foods there are pretty delicious.

Hope you will enjoy your trip and have a good time!

Best wishes yours Jeff

movie transcript

  • Wonder 奇迹男孩
  • When given the choice between being right or being kind.Choose kind." “如果要从正确和善良中做选择，请选择善良。”
  • "Be kind,for everyone is fighting a hard battle.And if you really wanna see what people are,all you have to do,is look." “善良一点，因为每个人都在与生活苦战，如果你想真正了解他人，你只需要，用心去看。”
  • "Maybe if we knew what other people were thinking,we'd know that no one's ordinary.And we all deserve a standing ovation at least once in our lives." “如果我们了解别人的想法，就会知道，没有人是普通的，每个人都至少值得大家起来为他鼓一次掌。”

I choose being kind. Firstly, because as human being , the most important thing is to have good relationship among people, especially those who you love most. Secondly, there are many things you can do them right, but you may hurt people concerned. For example, if you have a lot of food and someone asks you to share. You have right not to give him or her, but do you think it's kind? In a word, being kind is what makes us a man, and being right may not be so.

Lesson 17

老鼠救了狮子以后，还会发生什么事呢？请续写该故事，开头已经给出。

The mouse saved the lion from the trap. They became good friends. One day, the mouse was walking in a field, a cat came and wanted to eat him. The cat flew at the mouse. At that moment, the mouse soon ran away. The cat closely run after it. They run across the field, through the forest, over a stream. The mouse was really tired but the cat was closer and closer. Finally, they came under a big tree. To the rat's surprise, the lion was just there and the little mouse at once climbed to his back from the tail . At the sight of the lion, the cat immediately stopped and stared at the mouse. The cat thought that the lion must be asleep. But the lion roared and the cat was so frightened to run away. However, the cat was really wondering why the little mouse was never afraid of the lion who was the king of the forest.

Camping

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1.去露营go camping；不是go to camp，也不是go camp 2.回家是gohome/go back home;不是go to home 3.我感到兴奋应该是I feel excited；不是i feel exciting或者I am feel excited。4.我感到放松的应该是I feel relaxed；不是I feel relax；relax是动词；relaxed才是形容词 5.香肠三明治sausage sandwich注意拼写；另外大家可积累一些露营时的常见用品词汇，注意单复数 6.露营地camp site中间有空格 7.enjoy+doing sth 8.感到/感受/感觉是feel，为什么老有同学写成fell呢？

Excellent: Go Camping

Dear Tony,

I'd like to talk about my camping. I enjoy going camping with my friends because it's always great fun. We usually plan ahead and remember to take everything we need, such as tents and blankets. During the camping, we feel relaxed to see natural scenery and play together to enjoy each other's company. We are happy and excited. I'm always looking forward to going camping with my friends.

Yours,

Li Hua

  • 不少作文里也出现了好词好句，同学们可以有选择的记一些，上图字迹工整，内容分别回答了who what和how，得分点抓得准，语法和书写无误，整体很规矩。
  • 26日小作文反馈：1.去露营go camping；不是go to camp，也不是go camp 2.回家是go home/go back home;不是go to home 3.我感到兴奋应该是I feel excited；不是i feel exciting或者I am feel excited。4.我感到放松的应该是I feel relaxed；不是I feel relax；relax是动词；relaxed才是形容词 5.香肠三明治sausage sandwich注意拼写；另外大家可积累一些露营时的常见用品词汇，注意单复数 6.露营地camp site中间有空格 7.enjoy+doing sth 8.感到/感受/感觉是feel，为什么老有同学写成fell呢？

Jeff: Camping

On a sunny day of last summer holiday, I went camping with my parents.

At a meadow which is surrounded by green mountains, we put our tent. Beside our tent there is a small stream, looking clear and bright. After tent-putting, my mom and dad began to cook. I felt a little bit hungry, and the food tasted good. And then, I came to the river side, took out my toy gun and shotted water. It was very interesting, and I played until it was getting dark. I felt tired and went into our tent. The sleeping bag was comfortable, so I had a sweet sleeping.

Camping outside is wonderful, we can enjoy fresh air and watch stars over the sky. That's an unforgettable experience.

2019 nCoV

1.注意词性“保持健康”是keep/stay healthy；“我们的健康”是our health；分别是形容词和名词 2.坚持做某事keep doing sth.如坚持锻炼keep doing exercise 而不是keep do exercise 3. 回家可以用go home；go back home表达，而不是go to home；还有回学校可以用go back to school；有同学直接拿back当动词写了I will back to school soon,这样的句子是错的，back前面加上go 4.让某人做某事make/let sb do sth，注意后面的动词是原形，如make me wash my hands more frequently 5.注意“拥挤的”crowded；“相信”believe；“肥皂”soap的拼写 6.“需要帮助的人”可以用people in need来表达 7.有同学想表达感染病毒，infect这个词，表示“使感染/传染”可以说The virus infected us.不可以说We infected the virus. 8.情态动词must/should /can后+动词原形，绝大多数同学再第一个动词还知道用原形，但是后面加了and，就会乱加to或ing了，如有人写成We can wash our hands and to wear/wearing/wore/ masks. 这样是错误的，and后面也应该用动词原形啊！ 9.对某人某事有信心have confidence in sb/sth

Excellent: 2019 new Coronavirus

Recently, our country is fighting against the coronavirus. As a middle school student, what we do? what can't we do?

We can do some exercises. We can preview new knowledge. We can obey expert's instructions. We can stay at home.

We can't go outside without mask. We can't go to crowded places. We can't believe rumors and spread them.

Disease and virus will kill us, but they won't kill our spirit. If we fight against the virus, we will win, because for the last 5000 years we fought against our enemy just like today, we could win those wars, so we will win the war with virus.

Jeff: 2019 new Coronavirus

Recently, our country is fighting against the coronvirus. As a middle school student, although we can't go to school on time, we can't go to school on time, we can study on internet. At this special moment, we should continue to stay at home and can not go to public places, such as has station, airport, subway and so on. If we need to go out to buy something, we can wear masks and glasses to protect us. While staying at home, we can do more exercise and wash our hands more often. We can't stare at the computer too long, because it will hurt our eyesight.

I hope we can win this battle soon.

Self-nominations

1.内容上大家都能把点写齐全，但是罗列申请原因和自己的优势的时候要稍微注意一点逻辑，建议用连接词连接各个句子。 2.注意几个词组搭配：be good at sth/doing sth ；be interested in sth；want to do sth; practise/practice doing sth这里注意practise只能当动词，practice可以既当动词也能当名词 3.注意几个单词的拼写：竞争competition；合作cooperation；相信believe； 4.期待做某事look forward to doing sth 5.加入某个社团用join，不用join in

Jeff

Dear club president,

I'm Lihua. It's my honor to introduce myself in front of you.

I have many hobbies and interests. Besides studying hard, I also like Math, programming, science and so on. I like reading in my spare time. I take part in many matches too, so I have many advantages. I'm good at hands-on practice. I believes these abilities will be helpful. I want to join this club because I want to improve myself, and meet more friends who has the same interests. At this club, I can share my experience with others and learn from each other. Also, I can bring more ideas.

I hope to join the club and waiting for the good news. Thanks!

Excellent

Dear club president,

I'm Lihua. It's my honor to introduce myself in front of you.

I'm in seventh grade now, what I want to join most is the tennis club. I'm good at playing tennis, badminton and other sports. I have a good command of strength and balance when I play. Playing tennis can improve our physical fitness, especially in the community. If I have the honor to join the club, I will actively train, and help other, I will improve team awareness too!

The above is my introduction to myself, I would like to join the club very much.

Excellent

Dear club president,

I'm Lihua. It's my honor to introduce myself in front of you. I am interested in basketball, but I can't play it very well. I can learn a sport very quickly and my stamina is very good, so I want to join the basketball club. I can improve my skill in this club. If I have the honor to join the club, I can draw some poster for the club. I'm very good at drawing. So more and more students will know this club and join this club. And if I can take part in some matches, I will do my best to make a contribution.

Excellent

Dear club president, I'm Lihua. It's my honor to introduce myself in front of you. I'm keen on playing basketball and I've played it for years. Although I can play basketball really well, I want to improve my skills by joining the club, I can take part in some competitions to make a contribution to the club. Please let me join the basketball club.

Great

Dear club president, I'm Lihua. It's my honor to introduce myself in front of you.

I'm 12 years old, my advantages are: I'm tall, my height is 180cm, and I always play basketball with my friends, I have a strong faith to face difficulties, I always work well with other members and I have good athletic ability.

I always take part in basketball matches, I want to join this club to improve my level of playing basketball and to make my heart stronger, I want to make a contribution to our basketball team.

Please let me be a member of this club, I'm eager to join, thanks for your consideration.

good

Dear club president, I'm Lihua. It's my honor to introduce myself in front of you. First of all, I don't want to go to any sports clubs like Basketball Club and all sorts of terrible clubs which can make you sweaty and smelly. My advantage in this game-playing club is you don't need to worry about me for not playing enough. I assure you, that I will take part in every training and competitions as much as I could. Why do I want to join this club? The answer is simple: Why don't I join this club? Am I crazy to sacrifice my precious time on other boring dull clubs instead of this one? I can do lots of things for the club, I can help my "GAME" mates, I can torture the enemies and I can also mock anyone I could to make you satisfied instead of myself. Maybe you can train me and make me do better on the skills of playing games. I can't wait for your reply.

Yours, Lihua